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Overall, I enjoy the art and the interactions between the characters. However, for pacing purposes, it may have been better for Woobie to have died right after admitting that he was gay. Discussing everyone's sexuality during the death scene sort of caused the story to stall out and throw off what would have been a nice balance between comedy and drama. While the conversation may be important, I feel that it could have been included at a later time, without the Trapinch's involvement. That said, I do look forward to seeing how things progress. Keep at it.